ah yes...this girl again =] i haven't finished it, but yeah jus wanted to post it so i can get some critique before finalizing it...
one thing i know is that i havent cleaned the outline, and also i havent drawn in the legs, but im not planning to add hands...(and i remember that i was supposed to draw in the hairline and add bigger highlights, but those are for the next picture, cuz i tried it with this girl, and it didnt work so great ) ............so critique on stuff other than the aforementioned articles...
ha and shes all purple cuz im mimicking azulflame's color matched- picture (to an extent) --->[link]
oh and the pic is somewhat small cuz i downsized it in case of that art-theft-approving-law trash...
oi p.s. i wont be very active online today rite now cuz i still got some stuff to settle ... so thanks for all your support everyone ^_^
Oooooooo this is really pretty and purple is one of my fave colours^^
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Light critique: I know you're not going to actually add the hands, but you could add more shading at the bottom of the sleeves to indicate that she does have hands and her sleeves are really long. You did it very well with the breasts. It's just something to think about.
Also your light source isn't consistent, the shadows of her is on the right side, while the shadows on her body are on the left side.
-iz so jealous of the shades in the clothes- everything seems peachy keen, but me thinks the hair looks a bit too much, try thinning it? 8D nice work ^^
it's really good, but some parts of her are more bold than others like the hair and eyes take away from the ribbons and lower part of her face, and you can only really focus on her... center as in the pic... - rith
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Light critique: I know you're not going to actually add the hands, but you could add more shading at the bottom of the sleeves to indicate that she does have hands and her sleeves are really long. You did it very well with the breasts. It's just something to think about.
Also your light source isn't consistent, the shadows of her is on the right side, while the shadows on her body are on the left side.
Hope my critique helped.
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it's really good, but some parts of her are more bold than others like the hair and eyes take away from the ribbons and lower part of her face, and you can only really focus on her... center as in the pic...
- rith
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